Is it time to rethink your choice of words?
effective communication, marketing, writing January 14th, 2010
Since hubby turned 50, we’ve become members of AARP; which means we receive (and enjoy) their excellent publications.
In the Jan/Feb 2010 issue of the AARP Bulletin, there’s a short article about a British survey commissioned by financial company AXA, and the subsequent renaming contest surrounding the word “pension.”
Turns out that nearly a fifth of 18- to 24-year-old Brits think the word pension is stodgy. (No duh.)
The winning replacement, submitted by 29-year-old Donna Wood of Hampshire, England is:
Save Now. Play Later.
Genius.
But what this really brings to mind is how we get stuck using words and phrases that have lost their relevancy. With business writing and marketing/communications, it’s far too easy to lapse into same-old, same-old boilerplate language.
No word or phrase should be sacred. Everything should be, at least periodically, rethought. Step back now and then and ask this question: “What does this word or phrase really mean to my reader?”
P.S. Hey, State Farm Insurance, are you listening? With the transient culture we live in, I’m pretty sure “Like a good neighbor” doesn’t resonate like it used to.
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Is direct mail part of your 2010 marketing plan?
marketing January 5th, 2010
I think my letter carrier takes the holidays off. I literally got no mail from Dec. 27 through Jan. 2 but, boy oh boy, did the flood hit yesterday. Amidst some bills and checks (thanks, clients), I got an astounding number of direct mail pieces.
Direct mail?
Yeah, those over the age of 40 remember it. It’s the information that comes in the mailbox from companies who do all kinds of clever things to entice you to open it.
Much of what I got was very nicely done: Solid offers. Pleasing visuals. Conversational content. Well branded.
So it didn’t surprise me when I read that the Direct Marketing Association is estimating direct mail marketing to increase by more than $1 billion this year. That’s a RISE of $1 billion, putting the annual total spent on direct mail campaigns at about $45.5 billion in 2010.
Even more impressive is this result from the DMA’s annual study: Non-catalog direct mail returned $15.22 for every dollar spent in 2009. Wowza.
Are you making direct mail part of your 2010 marketing plan? It’s certainly worth considering in light of those astounding numbers don’t you think?
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Take it easy when it comes to building customer trust
marketing, web copy October 19th, 2009
While doing a little research on where to find Faygo Rock & Rye for a visiting relative, I went to Faygo.com to see if they had a store locator.
Of course, they have a store locator. But imagine my surprise when Faygo wanted everything but my firstborn before they’d tell me where to find their soda. Name, email, address and favorite flavor as REQUIRED fields?
Whoa, Faygo! Too much, too soon.
We’re like old friends who haven’t seen each other in decades. I’m not ready to divulge anything. I thought it would just be nice to get reacquainted.
Too bad it’s not going to happen now.
Lesson learned: Go slow. Build a relationship. And don’t be afraid to tell people how to find you without asking for anything in exchange.
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Stop sleepwalking through your copywriting
content, effective communication, marketing, web copy October 15th, 2009
While doing some research for an upcoming content project, I did a little poking around the About Us sections of some Fortune 100 companies.
Would you be surprised to learn that some of the biggest companies in the world use nondescript and innocuous language to describe themselves? I wouldn’t. It’s a comfortable place for many companies (and their copywriters) to be.
Phrases like “serving you in over 100 countries around the world,” “making great products for generations,” “dedicated to supporting,” and “our commitment to providing” say nothing of worth to your target audience. Worse, that kind of language does zip, zilch, nada to differentiate you from your competitors. Besides, who even talks like that in the real world?
Seth Godin says in marketing, if something makes you nervous, it’s probably a good idea. I say in copywriting, if you could write your Company Overview or About Us page in your sleep, rest assured that your audience will snooze, too, when they read it. If they read it.